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My english teacher gave me my paper back to proof read and I did but can you see any other mistakes?
Note: This is a paper on guilty pleasures.
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The pot is getting hotter and the smell is drifting throughout the house, the coffee is brewing. This liquid is a very enjoyable pleasure with a warm taste. Coffee has bad attributes connected to its name, it can make you hyper, then make you crash. There are many rumors having to do with this subject. Yet if you use it responsibly, these side effects tend to not happen. Coffee may be considered a guilty pleasure because of such stigmas such as this, yet there are many more becoming properties.
It is common sense that if you repeatedly drink dark liquids your pearly whites may no longer be pearly or white. Another downfall is that coffee can make you hyper, and then crash, it could also make you jittery. There’s the possibility of becoming addicted to caffeine. It has been said to stunt your growth. One of the biggest concerns, especially in the current economic climate, is the punches your wallet takes supplying this pleasure. Five dollars a day for coffee might be considered excessive . A pure health concern is the effect on the bladder. It is said to be something of a diuretic, which means that it makes you need to use the bathroom more.
But as there are good things to be said about this delicious drink also. Coffee may be able to stain your teeth, but we have this wondrous invention called a toothbrush which would tend to counter act the problem. Just as well, coffee makes you look like you have ADD, but that is only if you overdose on it. A cup in the morning or during a cold time outside won’t hurt. Same goes of addiction to caffeine, if you do enough of anything, you will most likely be addicted. The word to live by is moderation. As for this pleasure cleaning out your wallet, it is just not true. If you invest in a coffee pot then your 5 dollar venti coffee could pay for a whole months worth of coffee in your kitchen. Even a jobless student can afford 5 dollars a month. It is quick to make. It is also wuick to reheat. This lovely liquid may make you feel like you want to go the bathroom a bit more, but this is nothing compared to the benefits that come from coffee. Coffee has been proven to prevent certain cancers like liver, colon and bladder cancer. Heart disease, reduce the risk of diabetes and even raise your IQ and short term memory. There is studies shown to help prevent Parkinson’s disease and treat headaches. It also prevents gallstones. Some of the risks can be cut in half. This is the cheap hypochondriacs dream drink. It even helps your blood stream to remove excess fat which equals weight loss. Last but not least, the obvious alternative for coffee would be hot chocolate, yet hot chocolate has nearly 500 calories a serving whereas coffee has more towards 10.
For the reasons listed in the second paragraph family and friends do not realize why coffee if such a pleasure to me. My mother blames my great grandmother for giving me milk laced with coffee when I was four, and it’s been downhill ever since I worked my way up to black coffee. My father can’t even drink coffee black and doesn’t understand why I can. My friends just don’t understand its appeal. They all just list the same generic arguments, dark teeth and bad breath. Yet they can all down 5 sodas a day with caffeine and sugar and think it is all right, but one cup or thermos of coffee is horrible. I believe that they all hear stuff from the news that tends to emphasize and sometimes over exaggerate the negatives. It takes an avid coffee lover to understand what those who don’t drink it to understand. The only thing I listen to is they all think I drink it too much could have some validity since the nice ladies at Starbucks know me by name.
Yet I refuse to recognize their arguments. With all the work that needs to be done with graduation coming up and then college, I’m sure a decent amount of all nighters will be coming up. I will need some help, this amazing drink is my help. It is now October and winter is coming fast, it shall be cold outside, sometimes downright frigid. It just makes sense to warm myself up from the inside as well was the outside. In some weird was coffee helps with my allergies. Warmth soothes the throat, and when my throat is scratchy, coffee helps like nothing else. Something that is purely superficial is the way that smelling it in the morning just makes waking up a whole lot easier. Last but not least, the cheapness of this drink makes it a very logical choice in my broke perspective.
Coffee has many different attributes, some good, some not so good. But it is very obvious to me that the factual and personal points that say coffee is just a pleasure outweighs the factual and personal points that say coffee is a guilty pleasure. This is realized by the sheer number of reasons listed for each as well as

a 19y/o girl survived a congenital heart disease?
How is this possible?
and what kind of congenital heart disease does she have?
her symptoms:
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-cyanosis/paleness
-diaphoresis/excessive sweating
-weakness
-rapid breathing
lab exams:
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: low platelets, mean corpuscular hemoglobin, mean
corpuscular hemoglobin concentration
: normal WBC and all other components
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I’ve been studying piano for about a month now. It’s all on my own because I can’t afford lessons.
I’ve learned 4 or 5 songs now of varying difficulty, nothing too complex.. but I noticed that I still can not get a sense of what a song sounds like from the sheet music. I can read the notes and know the time they should get, but I still can’t make out a proper melody without a recording of the song. If I just keep learning songs from the sheet music, but with a recording to assist me, will I eventually get used to it and be able to sight read properly? Or are there specific exercises I should do to focus on sight reading?
Thanks

Religion, particularly christianity, has no monopoly on morals or family values. This can be seen in the good deeds and kind actions all over the world and from all walks of life.
More to the point, denying the existence of these things in non religious people is futile, dishonest, bigoted and childish.
So if morals, family values, altruism, and sound community values exist outside of religion, particularly christianity, then what’s the benefit of the creation myth and biblical literalism?
Is the only remaining benefit of religion, particularly christianity, the “belief” in an afterlife?
Does this leave only the fear of death that drives the hard liners?
There are many negatives associated with religion, particularly christianity, but as far as morals go, are they misguided or dishonest in laying claim to something which naturally exists in all people to a greater or lesser degree?
Thoughts..?

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A) I can’t start a conversation at all. I could stare at someone for 30 minutes and not say anything, just because I’m so socialphobic. I cannot force myself to talk, it feels like someone puts a bubble around my vocal cords the instant I part my lips. This goes for everyone but my girlfriend. I can’t start a conversation with my parents, and they know this too.
B) Once someone starts a conversation with me, I can’t for the life of me do small talk, or even keep the conversation going. I sound put-offish, but I can’t change this. I really do try. But I’m *extremely* quiet.
C) I usually don’t say more than 4-5 sentences every day, to anyone other than my girlfriend (I’ll put notes about her later, just for the hell of it)
D) I can talk fine on the internet, but I suspect this is because of my socialphobia (fear of being viewed negatively in a social situation).
My girlfriend and I have been dating for two years. I’ve known her since kindergarten, and we’d always had the same teacher in elementary school, and we shared half of our classes in middle school. Now I’m in High School, and we spend about 3/4 of our classes together. The reason I can be so social around her is for that exact reason; I’ve known her all my life and I see her a ton. She’s really nice, and understanding of my situation. She says she’ll help me however she can, but I don’t really know what she can do. She suggested exercises of sorts, but I don’t see what good they’ll do. I speak just fine around her–at least, when we’re alone/not being heard.
I also speak sort of okay to her best friends since I’ve seen them a lot too, but sort of like the way you might speak to a relative you’ve just met. I’m not terribly close with them, but we’re still friends. But other than them, I have no friends. A lot of the kids at school say they think I’m cool, but I can tell they’re just being nice and really just think I’m strange/awkward. Someone actually asked me if I had some sort of mental illness. Which I do; Asperger’s syndrome. But it doesn’t prevent people from being social that much, from what I hear.
Sorry that this was so long, and sort of rushed.

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I’m conducting a survey on personal views on embryonic stem cell research, what do you believe?

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